Thanks for the comments folks, had no idea that the score i sent in as an audition would go up on the website ! without the film it doesn't make much l sense, the lack of cohesion commented on is due to the rapidly changing perspective; interior, exterior,close up, pan &c of a rapidly changing single camera pass within and without a 38 acre site!
It's on my site : nortonsmith.com if you want to have a look but thanks for listening and all comments gratefully acknowledged,
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